Thursday, 26 February 2015

Basic facts ladder


Writing

Many years ago one day Maui had a problem with the sun. Maui wanted to fix it. So he got his brothers. Maui and his brothers made some ropes out of flax. So they could make the sun go slow so the day can be long because Maui said the days are going to fast. Maui said to his brothers to throw the rope they made at the sun. He said to throw the ropes so they did. The ropes got the sun, Maui got his hook and, stared to get the sun with the hook and said you are going to fast. The sun said stop I will go slow. So Maui stopped. Maui and his brothers went home. So that is how the day now is slow. The End   

WALT retell a Myth / Legend about Maui

Poem


Two stars and a wish


Wednesday, 25 February 2015

reading

W.A.L.T apply our knowledge of the story. 

Monday, 23 February 2015

My po

WALT reflect an object
Success criteria:


  • we look at different Poupou 
  • we fold our paper in half 
  • we practice drawing half of our Poupou
  • we use pastel to colour in half of our Poupou
  • we fold our paper in half to find the line of symmetry and to see the other side of the poupou
  • we can colour in the reflection of the Poupou  
Here are some pictures of different Poupou


 Bay Of Islands Poupou
 Bay of Islands Poupou
 Maniapoto Poupou
Ngāti Porou Poupou
 Rotorua Poupou
Te Arawa Poupou
Te Tiki O Tamamutu 
Te Whānau ā Apanui Poupou


























Manawatu Poupou



Mine 










Wednesday, 18 February 2015

Writing

My cat Herny. 


This is my cat Henry. He loves to sleep under my baters in my room on my bed. He is my favourite one of all my cats. He is a tabby cat. The bad thing about him is he fights with my other cat smoko and staws with claws. When we give the cats the food Henry will eat all of it. He is black white and brown. His eyes are green and yellow. I try to get him outside but he will just run away. I got him from my dads friend when I was 3 or 4 and he was 1.   








Sunday, 15 February 2015

Wednesday, 11 February 2015

My Writing

My name is Grace. My hair is like brown like chocolate. My eyes are like the blue sea. My favourite colour is purple. I love animals. I have 2 dogs 3 cats and 10 bunnies and 2 adults.  My favourite pet is my bunny Choc. 
My favourite thing to do is play animal jam. My favourite food is apples. My dogs name are Boots and Lucky. My cats names are Smoko Sox Henry I have 17 lambs and 19 sheep. Some of my bunnies names are Choc Chocolate Coco Jelly Lemon and Snowy. I play with my pets but it is really hard to get the bunnies. I have a bother ( Aden ) and a sister ( Jenna ). My favourite movie is Milo and Odis. My favourite thing to do is play with my friends and family. My wish is to go to London, New York and Paris.

WALT describe a character
Purpose (Why are we writing) - To present clear ideas in a simple structure to suit my audience.

Success Criteria:

  • Draft
  • Title
  • Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end?
  • Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.)
  • Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
  • language features - similes
  • punctuation - Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends?
  • Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in
  • make sure it makes sense - Proof read

Here are some class examples:

Nikau - I'm sporty, I always wear shorts and t' shirt in the winter and I'm friendly.
Milania - I have brown hair and brown eyes and I like to do hip hop and hockey.
Harrison - I have brown hair and I love rugby league
Fraser -I have blonde hair, I'm athletic and I like going on my computer.
Exemplar Level 2



Exemplar Level 3



Exemplar Level 4