Monday, 24 August 2015

Writing

Once there was a land, it was not just a land it was a candy land!!!!!!! Let me tell you about it. The people are gummy bears, pets are cupcakes, birds are chocolate chips, houses are chocolate, there are candy floss like bushes. There is gummy animals and rain is chocolate or strawberry milk. Sometimes it is chocolate milk and sometimes it is strawberry milk. If you lived there and you wished for something it would come true. The best thing was there is a mirror that would make everything happen like you say it would for instance if you said rain chocolate milk it would do it. However no one lived there. There was a water side that would take you there but it was in a shop. One day candy land exploded because no one lived there but it comes back every 1000 years so if no one lives there it will explode. The next day a girl named Kate went shopping and got the water side that would take you to candy land. So the next day Kate went on the water side she was so excited she went on it and then she went to candy land! Kate did not no what was going on. Then it started raining chocolate milk. Kate said "I never want to go back"! "But I want my little sister". She went in the house and went and sat down but, she did not know about the mirror. She said "I want my little sister" lots of times. She by the mirror and it came true!!!!!! Then she said "I want 9 dogs and 9 cats" and it came true!!!! Then after that they turned into gummy bears!!!! Then it stopped raining chocolate milk. Then they got really hungry so they started eating the candy floss brush and then it grow back. Now candy land can not explode.      The End. 

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