Wednesday, 16 September 2015

the new song we are learning

this is our new song we are learning in my class Poutokomanawa

Nei Rā Te Reo

A   E
Nei rā   te reo
D    
Te ta ngi  o taku  ngakau
A          E          A      D       E
Ku  a  haehae  te tau  o taku ate

A
Tangi tonu e
E A A A
mō ngā aituā   ko rātou kua   wheturangi tia
E E   E       A
E kore e nga  ro   te mamae   a u e

A            E A        D             
Kei muri nei tātou te hunga ora
A               E        D      
Kia mahi ai ngā mahi  anga tūpuna

A
Tangi tonu e
E A A A
mō ngā aituā  ko rātou kua  wheturangitia
E E   E       A
E kore e ngaro   te mamae a u e


Tuesday, 15 September 2015

writing

Success Criteria:

Make the story exciting - by adding juicy, descriptive words,
Plan - use a variety of planning tools, like mind maps and story mountains etc
Plot - you need to know what's happening next
Clues to make it a mystery
Problem - to be solved
Beginning - draw the reader in by setting the scene - crime scene
make sure it's in the right order,
Characters - investigators, culprit, (the person who committed the crime), suspects (people you may question about the crime that may have been involved)
need to be ordinary people
solve the mystery




Once upon a time, there was a girl named Holly. She was feeding 2 dogs named Scruffy and Otis. But Otis was not there! "I'm sure I put Otis back after his walk" said Holly. She got Scruffy and went down to peoples houses to ask if they had seen Otis, but they all said no. They saw a pug running up to them! But it was not Otis. They went home, and she feed Scruffy and put out a bowl of dog food for Otis. Then they went to bed. The next day, Holly grabbed Scruffy and they went looking for Otis. They just missed him because someone just grabbed Otis! Holly and Scruffy still went looking. At the end of the day Scruffy went home but Holly was still looking, but she went home 5 mins later. The next day the lady who found Otis put out posters so the people will know she has got Otis. Holly went and feed Scruffy and then they went for a walk to find Otis. As Holly and Scruffy were walking down the street she saw the poster about Otis. Holly went to the lady's house and got Otis back "Thank you" said Holly.        


The End 









This is my description of Holly, Otis and Scruffy.

Holly 1
Otis 2
Scruffy 3




Holly: brown hair, blue eyes, long hair, 15 years old, Māori and tall.
Otis: pug, small, brown eyes, short hair, 1year old and curly tail.
Scruffy: shih Tzu poodle cross, white hair, 1 year old, curly hair and short hair .



maths

W.A.L.T: finding equivalent fractions 

homework

this is my homework, it is a Māori game.

homework task:
This is your chance to be creative. I want you to create a little dance or game about body parts or movements. Here are some examples:

Songs - Ngā waiata

Mahunga, Pakihiwi, puku, hope, waewae.
Mahunga, Pakihiwi, puku, hope, waewae.
Mahunga, Pakihiwi, puku, hope, waewae.
Taringa, whatu, ihu waha e

Tō ringa ringa ki roto
Tō ringa ringa ki waho
Tō ringa ringa ki roto
ka ruiruihia
Kei te hopehope au
Kei te hurihuri au
Kei te pakipaki aue

Games - Ngā kēmu

Snap - Cards with body parts and movements
Bingo - Boards and cards with body parts and movements
Treasure hunt  - Have clues in Te Reo around the room
Simon says - Have a list of body parts and positions to read out

Te Reo homework is not due until next Friday because I have been out twice this week and we have all been extremely busy with Production Practice.


here is what I am going to say,
patoto ki runga I te tatau     (knock knock on the door)
tangohia ou hu     (take off your shoes)
ko te wa pangarau tenei     (maths time)
te arawhata kaupapa pumau      (basic facts ladder)
kei runga ahau I te paepae          (i'm on the paepae)

can you guess what I am doing? its a treasure hunt!




Monday, 14 September 2015

Reading


W.A.L.T: create an invention to help us solve the case. 

This is my invention for reading. Where it says press this button it will call the owner of the shop and the other button will make a big white flash in there eyes. But when you are in and you are the owner and you press the button it will not work but it will work if you are not the owner it will go on.